RFR: 8023216: Feedback on README-builds.html

[Dalibor Topic]

On 8/19/13 2:43 PM, Erik Joelsson wrote:
> And again, here we go:
> 
> http://cr.openjdk.java.net/~erikj/8023216/webrev.root.01/

A few typos:

javascript -> JavaScript
sourses -> sources

cheers,
dalibor topic


> 
> /Erik
> 
> On 2013-08-19 11:05, Erik Joelsson wrote:
>> Thanks for the feedback!
>>
>> I took most of it and made into a change. Also removed some obsolete parts that I stumbled over.
>>
>> Warn is supposed to be quiet, but at least hotspot is still being quite noisy.
>>
>> /Erik
>>
>> On 2013-08-06 01:18, Dan Smith wrote:
>>> I'm building for the first time under the new infrastructure (late to the party, I know).  I appreciate the comprehensive readme page.  Here's a list of minor points of feedback:
>>>
>>> "The set of repositories and what they contain": need to add nashorn
>>>
>>> "warn — Default and very quiet": I presume this is still an in-progress goal?  I'm seeing almost 3000 lines of text in a fresh build (including over 1000 from 'images')
>>>
>>> ---
>>>
>>> Some copy editing:
>>>
>>> "each repository is it's own independent repository": it's ->  its
>>>
>>> "Insure that GNU make": insure ->  ensure
>>>
>>> "rather thane excludes": thane ->  than
>>>
>>> "Other depends on pieces of code": other depends ->  others depend
>>>
>>> "for all classes that contains constants": contains ->  contain
>>>
>>> "we have missed to add support": missed ->  neglected



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