RFR: 8023216: Feedback on README-builds.html

[Dalibor Topic]

Nice, thanks.

On 8/21/13 2:53 PM, Erik Joelsson wrote:
> Thanks, updated webrev:
> 
> http://cr.openjdk.java.net/~erikj/8023216/webrev.root.02/
> 
> /Erik
> 
> On 2013-08-19 16:38, Dalibor Topic wrote:
>> On 8/19/13 2:43 PM, Erik Joelsson wrote:
>>> And again, here we go:
>>>
>>> http://cr.openjdk.java.net/~erikj/8023216/webrev.root.01/
>> A few typos:
>>
>> javascript ->  JavaScript
>> sourses ->  sources
>>
>> cheers,
>> dalibor topic
>>
>>
>>> /Erik
>>>
>>> On 2013-08-19 11:05, Erik Joelsson wrote:
>>>> Thanks for the feedback!
>>>>
>>>> I took most of it and made into a change. Also removed some obsolete parts that I stumbled over.
>>>>
>>>> Warn is supposed to be quiet, but at least hotspot is still being quite noisy.
>>>>
>>>> /Erik
>>>>
>>>> On 2013-08-06 01:18, Dan Smith wrote:
>>>>> I'm building for the first time under the new infrastructure (late to the party, I know).  I appreciate the comprehensive readme page.  Here's a list of minor points of feedback:
>>>>>
>>>>> "The set of repositories and what they contain": need to add nashorn
>>>>>
>>>>> "warn — Default and very quiet": I presume this is still an in-progress goal?  I'm seeing almost 3000 lines of text in a fresh build (including over 1000 from 'images')
>>>>>
>>>>> ---
>>>>>
>>>>> Some copy editing:
>>>>>
>>>>> "each repository is it's own independent repository": it's ->   its
>>>>>
>>>>> "Insure that GNU make": insure ->   ensure
>>>>>
>>>>> "rather thane excludes": thane ->   than
>>>>>
>>>>> "Other depends on pieces of code": other depends ->   others depend
>>>>>
>>>>> "for all classes that contains constants": contains ->   contain
>>>>>
>>>>> "we have missed to add support": missed ->   neglected
>>
>>



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