Integrated: 8325309: Amend "Listeners and Threads" in AWTThreadIssues.html
Alexey Ivanov
aivanov at openjdk.org
Fri Feb 9 11:48:58 UTC 2024
On Tue, 6 Feb 2024 08:39:01 GMT, Alexey Ivanov <aivanov at openjdk.org> wrote:
> Replace _“effect”_ with _“affect”_¹ because the meaning in the phrase “…the changes only _effect_ subsequent notification” is to “have an effect on.”
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> Add a comma to separate a conditional clause from the main one.
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> Use `<p>` instead of `<br>`: the example should be either in-line or in a separate paragraph.
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> Amend grammar: “a key _listeners_ is added.” Here, the usage of the indefinite article and the singular form of _“to be”_ implies the subject is singular.
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> ¹ For reference, see [‘Affect’ vs. ‘Effect’](https://www.merriam-webster.com/grammar/affect-vs-effect-usage-difference).
This pull request has now been integrated.
Changeset: 5daf622a
Author: Alexey Ivanov <aivanov at openjdk.org>
URL: https://git.openjdk.org/jdk/commit/5daf622aea8ccb914dd7fa3680ddd3114dc6a0c1
Stats: 4 lines in 1 file changed: 0 ins; 0 del; 4 mod
8325309: Amend "Listeners and Threads" in AWTThreadIssues.html
Reviewed-by: serb, tr
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PR: https://git.openjdk.org/jdk/pull/17725
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