RFR: 8338398: Trivially fix grammar and typos [v2]

[David Holmes]

On Thu, 15 Aug 2024 08:24:30 GMT, Pavel Rappo <prappo at openjdk.org> wrote:

>> Use "elapsed" here to match "completed".
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> I assume you both mean I should change "elapses" to "elapsed" throughout the PR, not just in that particular occurrence.

No, elsewhere you don't have an existing tense to match - I only want the sentence to be self-consistent. The question of whether the docs overall should be expressed in past or future tense is a much bigger issue.

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PR Review Comment: https://git.openjdk.org/jdk/pull/20584#discussion_r1718155121