[rfc][icedtea-web] Alexandr's fixes to default properties

Jie Kang jkang at redhat.com
Fri Apr 24 13:20:50 UTC 2015



----- Original Message -----
> Hello!
> 
> Here are few fixes to issues Alexandr found during translating.
> I did not check them carefully, but looks ok. I'm afraid ITW needs huge
> cleanup of default
> properties from native speaker (who is skilled in software *documentation*
> and naing conventions)

Hello,

Awesome!

A few nits below:

-HTMLmoreThenOne=More then one ({0}) applets found. Using  first. You can specify ''all'' or numbers to specify appelts you wont to run.
+HTMLmoreThenOne=More then one ({0}) applets found. Using  first. You can specify ''all'' or numbers to specify applets you wont to run.

s/wont/want

-BOHtml      = Location of HTML file to launch (url or file). You concate parameter ALL  or numbers (like 1 2 5) to select applets on page. However experimental, this switch should keep you still in safety.
+BOHtml      = Location of HTML file to launch (url or file). You can use parameter ALL  or numbers (like 1 2 5) to select applets on page. However experimental, this switch should keep you still in safety.

s/However experimental, this switch should keep you still in safety./This switch is experimental but should work safely

-<li>Feel free to include  browser of your choice</li></html>
+<li>Feel free to include browser of your choice</li></html>

s/browser/a browser

+<li>However good this sounds, this is surprisingly not working</li></html>

Just to double-check, is this intended? 

+FILEmozillaglobal64=Location of plugin library for global purposes  on Mozilla compliant browser, 64b systems.
+FILEmozillaglobal32=Location of plugin library for global purposes  on Mozilla compliant browser, 32b systems.

s/64b/64-bit
s/32b/32-bit

There are a few other lines where this change would be good too.

Rest looks good to me~


Regards,


> 
> J.
> 

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Jie Kang

OpenJDK Team - Software Engineering Intern


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