RFR: Copy edits, terminology fixes, and factual corrections to the README and the introduction [v2]

Mark Reinhold mr at openjdk.java.net
Fri Jun 19 23:52:12 UTC 2020


On Fri, 19 Jun 2020 23:42:16 GMT, Mark Reinhold <mr at openjdk.org> wrote:

>> 2020/6/18 21:03:01 -0700, notifications at github.com:
>>> @JesperIRL approved this pull request.
>>> 
>>> Thank you for these changes!  Just a minor typo to fix before pushing.
>>> 
>>>> what this guide has to offer. Still, the Developers' Guide should work as a source of knowledge also
>>> -for experienced contributors. This means that any descriptions in the Guide should be self-contained
>>> -or have explicit references to any information the reader is expected to already know. The information
>>> -should also be structured in such a way that it's easy to find details for any process, so that
>>> -one who already knows the big picture can quickly find that particular detail that was forgotten.
>>> +for experienced contributors. Any descriptions in the Guide should thus be self-contained
>>> +or have explicit references to any information thata the reader is expected to already know. The information
>>> 
>>> "thata" -> "that" ?
>> 
>> Thanks -- will fix.
>> 
>> - Mark
>
> /summary
>   - Change “OpenJDK community” to “OpenJDK Community”
>   - Omit needless words
>   - s/like/such as/g
>   - Fix various typos and grammatical errors
>   - Tone down “contains the defacto standard” to “suggests”
>   - The OpenJDK Community was launched in November 2006, not May 2007

/integrate

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PR: https://git.openjdk.java.net/guide/pull/18


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