RFR: Copy edits, terminology fixes, and factual corrections to the README and the introduction [v2]
Mark Reinhold
mr at openjdk.java.net
Fri Jun 19 23:52:12 UTC 2020
On Fri, 19 Jun 2020 23:42:16 GMT, Mark Reinhold <mr at openjdk.org> wrote:
>> 2020/6/18 21:03:01 -0700, notifications at github.com:
>>> @JesperIRL approved this pull request.
>>>
>>> Thank you for these changes! Just a minor typo to fix before pushing.
>>>
>>>> what this guide has to offer. Still, the Developers' Guide should work as a source of knowledge also
>>> -for experienced contributors. This means that any descriptions in the Guide should be self-contained
>>> -or have explicit references to any information the reader is expected to already know. The information
>>> -should also be structured in such a way that it's easy to find details for any process, so that
>>> -one who already knows the big picture can quickly find that particular detail that was forgotten.
>>> +for experienced contributors. Any descriptions in the Guide should thus be self-contained
>>> +or have explicit references to any information thata the reader is expected to already know. The information
>>>
>>> "thata" -> "that" ?
>>
>> Thanks -- will fix.
>>
>> - Mark
>
> /summary
> - Change “OpenJDK community” to “OpenJDK Community”
> - Omit needless words
> - s/like/such as/g
> - Fix various typos and grammatical errors
> - Tone down “contains the defacto standard” to “suggests”
> - The OpenJDK Community was launched in November 2006, not May 2007
/integrate
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PR: https://git.openjdk.java.net/guide/pull/18
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