From frederic.parain at oracle.com  Wed May  4 02:42:06 2011
From: frederic.parain at oracle.com (Frederic Parain)
Date: Wed, 04 May 2011 11:42:06 +0200
Subject: jmx-dev Request for review (XS): 7031754 javax.management docs
 need to be updated to replace Java SE 6 occurrences
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	<4DC06789.9000801@oracle.com>
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Fix updated with "Java platform documentation on JMX technology"
instead of "Java SE 7 Platform documentation on JMX technology".

Webrev updated too.

Fred

On 05/ 3/11 10:37 PM, Sowmya Kannan wrote:
>   Hi Mandy,
> I would probably go with
>
> Java platform documentation on JMX technologyor  Java SE platform documentation on JMX technology
>
> Unless we want to specifically indicate a version number, for example -
> "next generation Java Plug-in introduced in the Java SE 6 update 10
> release" or "strings in switch support introduced in the Java SE 7 release"
> we don't usually specify a version number for the same reason you
> mentioned - maintainability.
>
> Thanks
> Sowmya
>
>
> On 5/3/2011 1:26 PM, Mandy Chung wrote:
>> On 05/03/11 08:04, Frederic Parain wrote:
>>> A very simple set of changes updating "Java SE 6 Platform" to
>>> "Java SE 7 Platform".
>>>
>>> http://java-rts.france.sun.com/mackdrive/export/jrts/work/fp148911/JMX/Fix-7031754/jdk/webrev/
>>>
>>
>> This means that we need to update these files in every release. Would
>> it be better to rephrase them to be independent of the release number?
>> For example,
>>
>> Java SE 6 Platform documentation on JMX technology
>> - > JMX Technology Guide
>>
>> or something like that?
>>
>> You may want to check with Sowmya what the appropriate name to
>> reference the JMX guide.
>>
>> Mandy

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From frederic.parain at oracle.com  Fri May  6 06:40:14 2011
From: frederic.parain at oracle.com (Frederic Parain)
Date: Fri, 06 May 2011 15:40:14 +0200
Subject: jmx-dev Request for review (XS): 7031754 javax.management docs need
 to be updated to replace Java SE 6 occurrences
Message-ID: <4DC3FA3E.1080803@oracle.com>

A very simple set of changes updating "Java SE 6 Platform documentation
on JMX technology " to "Java Platform documentation on JMX technology".

http://cr.openjdk.java.net/~fparain/7031754/webrev.00/

Thanks,

Fred

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Phone: +33 4 76 18 81 17
Email: Frederic.Parain at Oracle.com


From mandy.chung at oracle.com  Fri May  6 06:55:34 2011
From: mandy.chung at oracle.com (Mandy Chung)
Date: Fri, 06 May 2011 06:55:34 -0700
Subject: jmx-dev Request for review (XS): 7031754 javax.management docs
 need to be updated to replace Java SE 6 occurrences
In-Reply-To: <4DC3FA3E.1080803@oracle.com>
References: <4DC3FA3E.1080803@oracle.com>
Message-ID: <4DC3FDD6.2040105@oracle.com>

  On 5/6/11 6:40 AM, Frederic Parain wrote:
> A very simple set of changes updating "Java SE 6 Platform documentation
> on JMX technology " to "Java Platform documentation on JMX technology".
>
> http://cr.openjdk.java.net/~fparain/7031754/webrev.00/
>
Looks good to me.

Mandy