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<p>Hi Xuelei, looks good overall, some minor suggestions only:</p>
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<li>1st paragraph: Change "...block extensions used in client
side" and "...used to block extensions used in server side" to
say "...used in the client." and "...used in the server." (you
can remove the "side" words).</li>
<li>1st paragraph: if you use "neither" then you should follow it
with "nor" rather than "or"<br>
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<li>The 3rd paragraph's leading sentence is a fragment. You might
be able to remove that sentence entirely without changing the
meaning behind the paragraph. With that first sentence removed
and the "But" from the next sentence also omitted I think it
reads a little more smoothly, at least to my eyes.<br>
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<li>I'm not sure if we have any style guide rules concerning
contractions in release notes, but I think changing "don't"
-> "do not" also reads better for these kinds of things.</li>
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<p>--Jamil<br>
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<div class="moz-cite-prefix">On 1/29/2021 4:23 PM, Xue-Lei Fan
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<div class="">May I have the following release note reviewed:</div>
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<div class="">Thanks,</div>
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