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<div class="">Hi Jamil,</div>
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All good catches! Thanks for the review. I updated accordingly.
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<div class="">On Jan 29, 2021, at 4:41 PM, Jamil Nimeh <<a href="mailto:jamil.j.nimeh@oracle.com" class="">jamil.j.nimeh@oracle.com</a>> wrote:</div>
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<p class="">Hi Xuelei, looks good overall, some minor suggestions only:</p>
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<li class="">1st paragraph: Change "...block extensions used in client side" and "...used to block extensions used in server side" to say "...used in the client." and "...used in the server." (you can remove the "side" words).</li><li class="">1st paragraph: if you use "neither" then you should follow it with "nor" rather than "or"<br class="">
</li><li class="">The 3rd paragraph's leading sentence is a fragment. You might be able to remove that sentence entirely without changing the meaning behind the paragraph. With that first sentence removed and the "But" from the next sentence also omitted I think
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</li><li class="">I'm not sure if we have any style guide rules concerning contractions in release notes, but I think changing "don't" -> "do not" also reads better for these kinds of things.</li></ul>
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Hi,
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<div class="">May I have the following release note reviewed:</div>
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<div class="">Thanks,</div>
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