README-builds.html feedback
Jonathan Gibbons
jonathan.gibbons at oracle.com
Mon Aug 19 18:03:53 UTC 2013
Dan,
It's nice to see other other people being "picky".
-- Jon
On 08/05/2013 04:18 PM, Dan Smith wrote:
> I'm building for the first time under the new infrastructure (late to the party, I know). I appreciate the comprehensive readme page. Here's a list of minor points of feedback:
>
> "The set of repositories and what they contain": need to add nashorn
>
> "warn — Default and very quiet": I presume this is still an in-progress goal? I'm seeing almost 3000 lines of text in a fresh build (including over 1000 from 'images')
>
> ---
>
> Some copy editing:
>
> "each repository is it's own independent repository": it's -> its
>
> "Insure that GNU make": insure -> ensure
>
> "rather thane excludes": thane -> than
>
> "Other depends on pieces of code": other depends -> others depend
>
> "for all classes that contains constants": contains -> contain
>
> "we have missed to add support": missed -> neglected
>
> ---
>
> —Dan
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