RFR 8189717: Too much documentation of ProcessBuilder.start copied to ProcessBuilder.startPipeline

[Roger Riggs]

Hi Lance,

Updated in place with your suggestion.
http://cr.openjdk.java.net/~rriggs/webrev-process-8189717/

Thanks, Roger

On 7/13/2018 4:31 PM, Lance Andersen wrote:
> Hi Roger,
>
>> On Jul 13, 2018, at 3:48 PM, Roger Riggs <Roger.Riggs at Oracle.com 
>> <mailto:Roger.Riggs at Oracle.com>> wrote:
>>
>> Hi Lance,
>>
>> How about:
>> Subsequent modifications to any of {@code builder}swill not affect 
>> the returned {@link Process}.
> ….. to any of the specified builders ….
>
> At a minimum, you need  ‘the’ added to the above
>
>> Roger
>>
>>
>> On 7/13/2018 3:26 PM, Lance Andersen wrote:
>>> Hi Roger,
>>>
>>> I am struggling with the wording at:
>>>
>>> ———
>>> * Subsequent modifications to any of process builders in the {@code 
>>> builders}
>>> 1198 * argument will not affect the returned {@link Process}.
>>>
>>> ————
>>>
>>> Maybe specified/provided  process builders
>>>
>>> Not sure, will think about it a bit.
>>>
>>> Otherwise I think the changes are fine
>>>> On Jul 13, 2018, at 3:07 PM, Roger Riggs <Roger.Riggs at oracle.com 
>>>> <mailto:Roger.Riggs at oracle.com>> wrote:
>>>>
>>>> Please review a doc change to improve the description of 
>>>> ProcessBuilder.startPipeline.
>>>> The clarifications are not intended to imply any change in behavior 
>>>> and only focus the description
>>>> on the steps taken for each command in the pipeline.
>>>> (A CSR will be needed also when the wording is finalized).
>>>>
>>>> Webrev:
>>>> http://cr.openjdk.java.net/~rriggs/webrev-process-8189717/ 
>>>> <http://cr.openjdk.java.net/%7Erriggs/webrev-process-8189717/>
>>>> Issue:
>>>> https://bugs.openjdk.java.net/browse/JDK-8189717
>>>>
>>>> Thanks, Roger
>>>>
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