RFR 8189717: Too much documentation of ProcessBuilder.start copied to ProcessBuilder.startPipeline

[Lance Andersen]

Hi Roger,

> On Jul 13, 2018, at 3:48 PM, Roger Riggs <Roger.Riggs at Oracle.com> wrote:
> 
> Hi Lance,
> 
> How about:
> Subsequent modifications to any of {@code builder}s will not affect 
> the returned {@link Process}.
….. to any of the specified builders ….

At a minimum, you need  ‘the’ added to the above

> Roger
> 
> 
> On 7/13/2018 3:26 PM, Lance Andersen wrote:
>> Hi Roger,
>> 
>> I am struggling with the wording at:
>> 
>> ———
>> * Subsequent modifications to any of process builders in the {@code builders}
>> 1198      * argument will not affect the returned {@link Process}.
>> 
>> ————
>> 
>> Maybe specified/provided  process builders  
>> 
>> Not sure, will think about it a bit.
>> 
>> Otherwise I think the changes are fine
>>> On Jul 13, 2018, at 3:07 PM, Roger Riggs <Roger.Riggs at oracle.com <mailto:Roger.Riggs at oracle.com>> wrote:
>>> 
>>> Please review a doc change to improve the description of ProcessBuilder.startPipeline.
>>> The clarifications are not intended to imply any change in behavior and only focus the description
>>> on the steps taken for each command in the pipeline.
>>> (A CSR will be needed also when the wording is finalized).
>>> 
>>> Webrev:
>>>    http://cr.openjdk.java.net/~rriggs/webrev-process-8189717/ <http://cr.openjdk.java.net/%7Erriggs/webrev-process-8189717/>
>>> Issue:
>>>    https://bugs.openjdk.java.net/browse/JDK-8189717 <https://bugs.openjdk.java.net/browse/JDK-8189717>
>>> 
>>> Thanks, Roger
>>> 
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